Monsters

Chapter 2 - Page 5
December 11th, 2013, 4:34 pm

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Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
December 11th, 2013, 4:38 pm
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Wheeeee I've been excited to upload this page. It was a lot of fun. Lylah was a character who wasn't in my original story outline, but I came up with later (and tied her into some important future plot points), and I'm really happy with her. I like quirky/adorable little-sister relationships a lot.

The only sad thing is that she won't be in any more pages this Chapter. Sob.


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Posted by TheArtfulJellyfish (Guest)
December 11th, 2013, 7:03 pm
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Lol! Alex's face in panel 7. And Lylah in panel 6. And Lylah in panel 8. And Lylah in panel 11. And just... Lylah. XD

My only complaint is the speech bubble order has, yet again, become... *bows head sorrowfully* confusing. Just a little bit in 3 and 4, and then rather a lot in six. Your page-flow has been getting a lot better, just occaaasionally stuff like this happens that makes me stop and go, "Whaaat?" And I don't want to stop and go "what," I want to stop and go, "OMAGOSH LYLAH'S FREAKING ADORABLE!" Because she is! So... much... enthusiasm... So... many... exclamation marks...



Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
December 13th, 2013, 6:51 pm
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@TheArtfulJellyfish: Yeeeaaahh I had trouble with bubbles in this page >.< Tried my best; panel 6 in particular, I kind of imagined them all almost talking at the same time anyways XD. At least the lower part of the panel. But don't want it to be distracting. Thanks for always letting me know XD.



Posted by TheArtfulJellyfish (Guest)
December 14th, 2013, 12:31 am
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@Valik Sparks: Hehe, well, glad to hear that always letting you know's a positive thing and not annoying and overly critical. XD



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