Monsters

Chapter 2 - Page 4
December 8th, 2013, 4:58 pm

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Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
December 8th, 2013, 5:01 pm
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Keeping secrets can be bad for your friendships!


And Desperate Housewives is just bad for your mental health altogether.


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Posted by TheArtfulJellyfish (Guest)
December 11th, 2013, 4:01 pm
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Yaaaay, quirky interesting friends! I like that you've given them some distinct voices. Chandler seems to have this kind of sarcastic tone, even if he's not being directly sarcastic, and Cassie seems more friendly and upbeat.
I'm going to assume that bit about Desperate Housewives would be funnier if I knew the show, but as it is I was at least a little amused, if not just by the blank stares and the massive wall of text that followed. XD



Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
December 13th, 2013, 6:44 pm
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@TheArtfulJellyfish: Oh yay! I'm glad that you've been getting those vibes cause that's definitely what I'm going for XD.

And yes, sadly not all amusing references can be gotten by all the people. But I do want to keep working on ways to have the characters almost explain the references themselves.. I dunno, comedic writing is an art in itself. Must practice.



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