Monsters

Chapter 2 - Page 3
December 4th, 2013, 5:24 pm

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Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
December 4th, 2013, 5:24 pm
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Yes, Panel 5 is completely unnecessary and wasn't even in the script. I was just having too much fun XD.


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Posted by TheArtfulJellyfish (Guest)
December 5th, 2013, 12:29 am
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Panel five was the best panel. Period. Absolutely necessary. XD Loling so hard...
I also really like the fourth frame. It's interesting, how it's kind of a double-panel, and the dialogue crosses over the divider. Interesting.
My only complaint about this page, though, is the vagueness of Alex's question. It seemed a little unnatural that the teacher would have any idea what, "what do spiders like" means, let alone be able to provide the exact answer Alex was looking for. I kinda scratched my head at that, though it's minor enough that it doesn't really matter, and the picture of Kira with an umbrella more than makes up for it. Also your eccentric-looking science teacher looks quite eccentric. Nice touch. XD



Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
December 8th, 2013, 5:17 pm
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@TheArtfulJellyfish: Thank yoouu! Eheheh I'm glad you like the random Kira sillyness XD. And you definitely have a point with the dialogue. Could've scripted that better.

Next time!



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