Monsters

Chapter 1 - Page 21
November 6th, 2013, 5:17 pm

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Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
November 6th, 2013, 5:17 pm
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SPEECH BUBBLLLLLEEESSSSS!!!


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Posted by TheArtfulJellyfish (Guest)
November 8th, 2013, 1:18 am
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ELLIPPPPSEEEESSSSSS! Because oh my gosh so many. XD It's something I've noticed about my own writing, too. You and I, we like our pauses. For the sake of fluidity I've started trying to thin it out of mine; you miiiight consider trying it with yours. I don't wanna tell you how to write though, it works fine and you can do whatever you want of course. It's just one of those things that's kind of in the background until you notice it, and then it's REALLY apparent. Like blinking. Do you have any idea how often you blink?! And then once you start thinking about it's like, "OMAGOSH SO MANY BLINKS IT'S SO ANNOYING MAKE IT STAAAAHP!" Fortunately, most people aren't conscious of how many times they (or others) blink. Phew!
But for the few of us who are staring at your metaphorical eyelids, you may consider "..."ing a bit less. =)
Anyhow, I like this page. Mmhmm, yes I do. Gives a bit more of an in-depth look at Spider-Girl, starts to really build an interesting chemistry between our two heroes, was funny and a tad touching. Keep up the good work, m'lad! (I'm secretly hoping against hope that this is an entirely platonic relationship. Even though I know all chance of that was doomed before you could say "Now what's interesting about neurons is..." *Sigh* I GUESS I ship them. Even though this could be the most adorable little-sistership ever...)



Valik Sparks
Posted by Valik Sparks
November 10th, 2013, 4:50 pm
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@TheArtfulJellyfish: Eeee thank you for all the wonderful input!

I do spam ellipses really bad.. XD I've been trying to cut it down a bit in my regular writing -and now here it comes back in my comic-scripting!

With Kira I wanted to use a lot of ellipses on purpose to show that she's not very comfortable with/good at talking. But this panel does have quite a lot, more than necessary, especially for Alex, now that I look at it XD.

And NOW you have me counting my blinks! Nooooo make it stahhhp.



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